The Videos are below.
Once you have watched your group, go to the comments and post 3 ways you can improve your performance. Think about-
Remember to make a note or cut and paste the comments so that you have a record of them too.
You did excellently today, i was very impressed- well done.
ps- you might want to make the video larger when you watch it so that you can have a good view of your performance
9/16/2014 04:31:47 am
Things to improve on:
9/16/2014 05:27:45 pm
Very clear and achievable targets. I am sure you will have no problem implementing these and improving your performance
9/16/2014 04:57:31 am
Three ways that I can improve my performance -
9/16/2014 05:26:43 pm
Excellent Sophie, insightful with good detail.
9/16/2014 06:06:50 am
Star⭐️: I think I showed how I didn't want to be there by my facial expressions and how I rolled my eyes when chloe (Amanda) spoke.
9/16/2014 06:10:49 am
Wish🌠: I could also sit further away from chloe and distance myself a bit more to show the relationship between us.
9/16/2014 05:25:48 pm
I love the pictures Lauren, nice touch.
9/17/2014 12:59:15 am
9/17/2014 01:26:39 am
Things I need to improve on:
9/17/2014 06:14:45 am
1. I should have used proxemics to reveal more to the audience about the relationships between characters.
9/17/2014 06:16:25 am
For no. 3 dridyed = drifted
9/17/2014 09:06:34 am
1) I could try to improve my characterisation by pronouncing my words more clearly, with clearer diction and by exaggerating some sounds such as vowels, therefore portraying that I am a posh character.
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