Asylum openings HJO
Watch back your opening scenes, see if you can see any ways of making them more effective.
Do you successfully have the impact on the audience that you intended to?
Is there a way to make your character's madness come across more clearly?
Could you do more to make your character sympathetic or scary?
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Mr Otley and Miss Gabriel
A duo like Ant and Dec, but with less accent