Below you will see the 3 video performances from today's lesson.
comment on each with 'a star and a wish', try to give them at least a couple of sentences and use good drama vocabulary. Comments have to be approved before publishing, s it won't appear immediately.
For ease, I have named them for you
Rain-Atlanta, Caitlin, Madison, Megan, Skye, Sean,
Fayre- Eve, Jaime, Lauren, Lewis, Matthew, Steph,
War- Chloe, Ella, Lilly, Sophie, Tilly
star- comedy really effective at ending as all of your eyes focused on Sean as he fell and that put all of the focus on him. This the audience could really see his wide eyes and trembling lip, meaning we could laugh at how sad he was
wish- I wish the characters had been clearer, perhaps if you entered one at a time this would help, so we could all form an idea of who each character is.
So leave a comment with good feedback- no excuse to not do it! I expect these by Thursday's lesson.