Watch back your opening scenes, see if you can see any ways of making them more effective.
Do you successfully have the impact on the audience that you intended to?
Is there a way to make your character's madness come across more clearly?
Could you do more to make your character sympathetic or scary?
You can see all the performances by clicking on the link below.
See how effectively you implemented your feedback
The Videos are below.
Once you have watched your group, go to the comments and post 3 ways you can improve your performance. Think about-
Remember to make a note or cut and paste the comments so that you have a record of them too.
You did excellently today, i was very impressed- well done.
ps- you might want to make the video larger when you watch it so that you can have a good view of your performance